Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Random Thought

If I had to re-learn the English language, I'd be pretty confused. Here is a great example: the word "up." Why is the word "up" so confusing?
You get "up" in the morning.
When you want to know what a word means, you look it "up" in the dictionary.
When you vomit, you throw "up."
Women sometimes put on make "up" to look pretty.
When you tell a lie, you made something "up."
When you want someone to be quiet, you tell them to shut "up."
This is why I'm thankful that I already speak English.

Flashback

Flashback

I remember walking into kindergarden class,

it was a rainy,

gray,

day,

Wearing my yellow, wet raincoat.

Stepping off the plane,

Seeing exotic things,

That I have never laid eyes on,

I was only seven years old,

Thought I had seen all the beauties in the world,

I was wrong.

I’ve smelled the most greenest grasses,

Smelled the beautiful, yet mysterious essence,

Of this strange, tropical world,

I have seen the native people of this country,

I was in Honduras.

I have traveled to El Salvador,

In search of my sister and brother,

I have eaten a

Delicious,

Mouth-watering,

Warm,

Cheesy,

Pupusa,

While drinking a

Sweet,

Sour,

Beverage called “Fresco de Mora,”

Blackberry Juice.

I have walked on my grandfather’s ranch,

Feeling out of place,

Confused,

Scared,

An American compared to my relatives.

I have rode on a beautiful, brown horse,

I have felt the warmth of chickens,

In between my palms.

I remember walking into kindergarden class,

like it was yesterday.

Monday, October 12, 2009

Iraq, the views of the ones.

Welcome to the soldier side
Where there is no one here but me
People all grow up to die
There is no one here but me

Be sure to use SOAD.

Sleep-Deprived Limerick

To school I must go in the morrow.
'Tis the origin of all my sorrow.
Luckily the night
Shall delay my stark plight.
Just wish I had more time to borrow.


--Kevin N.

Kid Cudi Lyrics- The Prayer

My heart thump not from being nervous
Sometimes I'm thinking God made me special here on purpose
So all the while 'til I'm gone make my words important so
If I slip away, if I die today the last thing you remember won't
Be about some apple bottom jeans with the boots with the fur
Baby how I dream of being free since my birth
Cursed but the demons I confronted would disperse
Have you ever heard of some **** so real
Beyond from the heart, from the soul you can feel

(Chorus)
And if I die before I wake, I pray the lord my soul to take
But please don't cry, just know that I have made these songs for you
And if I die before I wake I pray the lord my soul to take
'cuz I'm ready for a funeral

(Verse 2)
My mind runs I can never catch it even if I got a head start
God please tell me I am feeling so alone way
I don't need to worry 'cuz I know the world'll feel this *****
Blessing in disguise but I am not hiding who I am open your eyes bro
If I ever met you, I appreciate the love yo
Girls that I dated, it's ok I am not mad yo
Unless you stabbed me in the heart, no love ho, this **** is so ill
Play it back from the top if you recognize real

(Chorus 2x)
And if I die before I wake, I pray the lord my soul to take
But please don't cry, just know that I have made these songs for you
And if I die before I wake, I pray the lord my soul to take
'cuz I'm ready for a funeral


The reason i thought i should blog this is because i love this song its so revealing and he really expresses his feelings in all his music!
'cuz I'm ready for a funeral (I'm ready for the funeral, I'm ready for the funeral)

Thursday, October 8, 2009

WELCOME!

bareBLOGkin is the new writers gallery for barebodkin.net. The old one was 12 years old and I thought it was time to try something different.

Only my students are able to contribute to this gallery, but anyone can read through and leave a comment if you like.

A few thoughts about submissions:

1) All writing must be original
2) Autobiographical poems, Shakespeare performance reflections, rhetorical analysis essays, and other entries from your Writer's Notebook are all welcome!
3) Feel free to leave a brief reflection on your piece in the form of a "WRITER'S STATEMENT."
4) Please sign your piece with your first name and the initial of your last name (ex. "- Jim D.")
5) Do not give your email address
6) Feel free to enhance your entry with a picture or photograph
7) This gallery is intended as a place for students to share writing that they're proud of. It's not an assignment and it doesn't receive a grade. It's merely an opportunity for students to distinguish themselves.

Check out my entry, a poem called Graffiti Artist, below.

Enjoy!

Graffiti Artist


Looking up from the page
I just barely catch
as the train pulls out
of Jamaica the words
Happy Anniversary Dianne
high on a concrete wall
in a hand unsteady from
haste or joy it’s hard to say.

Were you so completely clueless
hooting at a girl like men
on 35th St. or like a Mayan
priest out there on the
verge of electrocution
mixing moonlight and solstice
to show an angry god
you’d kill out of love?

I know.
With no other hope
or way of getting through
before disappearing you just
put some words down
any way you could.

Jim D.
WRITER'S STATEMENT: I like poems that talk about poetry and this is one I wrote about why I write poems. It acknowledges that writing is a risky, even dangerous endeavor (it takes up your time; it might fail; you might embarrass yourself; you're expressing something you might be afraid to show others...) "Graffiti Artist" came from a moment when I was on the LIRR and I saw a spray painted message in a really difficult place to get to that wished some anonymous "Dianne" a happy anniversary. It made me think about the tremendous desire that person had to express himself and the risks he took to do it (unlike the writer of the graffiti in the photo above). The phrase "I know" in the poem is so important to me that I gave it its own line. It's the moment that the speaker, passing by on his journey, identifies with another writer and shares in the understanding of what drives one to write.